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Post by deathclaw on May 6, 2008 22:08:50 GMT -5
"Ok..." Deathclaw said, and then padded out of camp with Frostfox.
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Post by Frostfox on May 6, 2008 22:10:36 GMT -5
As soon as they were well into the forest Frostfox turned to face Deathclaw. "You went to ShadowClan last night?"
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Post by deathclaw on May 6, 2008 22:13:37 GMT -5
"Yes...I did." Deathclaw said as soon as they had stopped walking. "I was at the carrion place, killing the rats that live there...It's my revenge for what those crowfood eaters did to my parents." Deathclaw's voice rose in anger till he was literally hissing the words.
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Post by Frostfox on May 6, 2008 22:15:24 GMT -5
Frostfox placed his tail on Deathclaw's shoulder. "Easy, Deathclaw. I know it's hard to lose family. I lost mine when I was a kit."
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Post by deathclaw on May 6, 2008 22:19:03 GMT -5
"I also lost my younger brother to those rats in the same day." Deathclaw said, calming down somewhat. He felt the ache of longing to see his parents again. This ache also meant that he would spend that night visiting death upon the rats.
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Post by Frostfox on May 6, 2008 22:26:05 GMT -5
Frostfox lowered his eyes. "I was abandoned by my parents. They forced my brother and sister to leave with them. My sister's name was Snowfox. She died... My brother is Stonefox. He's still alive and out there somewhere. He and Snowfox sometimes visit my dreams. I don't know what has become of my parents..." Turning his face, he looked at Deathclaw with his amber eyes. "It is an emotional battle that a cat must go through when he loses his family, but you must be the winner. You can't let your anger and sadness control you. True, the pain of the loss is great, but you must be stronger than the pain. You still have your whole life ahead of you, Deathclaw. You have a Clan to live with and a mate to love. It's hard to let go of the past, I know, but you must start to release your grip on these painful memories."
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Post by deathclaw on May 6, 2008 22:44:13 GMT -5
"I won't stop until I've killed every last art that killed my parents and my brother." Deathclaw said. "My brother and I were in the same patrol when we found our parents. We knew it was the rats that had killed them, so we decided to attack them. We went in. though we killed many, my brother was slain by the leader of the rats. Frostfox, that rat can talk our language." He said quickly.
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Post by Goldstream on May 7, 2008 6:50:11 GMT -5
((Firestars journey Special Edition the book?? Your copying you know that right??))
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Post by deathclaw on May 7, 2008 9:42:11 GMT -5
(Sort of...But this time the rat that talks only is like, "You die now cat." and "You back for more?")
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Post by Frostfox on May 7, 2008 14:25:50 GMT -5
((Hmm... Deathclaw, the plot is great and all, but I don't think it's a good idea to copy it...))
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Post by deathclaw on May 7, 2008 14:41:26 GMT -5
(I'm not...Trust me all I'm taking is that little part)
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Post by Frostfox on May 7, 2008 15:45:14 GMT -5
((Alright. Forget I said anything then. Sorry dude!))
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Post by deathclaw on May 7, 2008 15:47:49 GMT -5
( that's ok I might have had to explain it to someone else who isn't as understanding as you.)
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Post by Frostfox on May 7, 2008 16:59:10 GMT -5
((*smiles*))
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Post by deathclaw on May 7, 2008 20:23:38 GMT -5
(your post)
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