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Post by Frostfox on Jan 20, 2008 19:55:34 GMT -5
Okay. How about reading some of the accepted applications? I know that helped me on the other site...
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Post by {♥.::Frosteh::.♥} on Jan 20, 2008 20:26:27 GMT -5
Swiftclaw, the only thing I can say is check your spelling of the words by hand because sometimes you spell something right, like "here" when you meant to say "her," and it skips over it because it is spelled correctly. Just do a quick check, re-read your application, and then I can garuntee your acceptance!
~Frostwhisper
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Post by Swiftclaw on Jan 20, 2008 20:28:04 GMT -5
oh ok i will get right on it.
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Post by Swiftclaw on Jan 20, 2008 20:34:01 GMT -5
i finished proofing it
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Post by Frostfox on Jan 20, 2008 20:42:47 GMT -5
It's much better, but you need to un-capitalize "is" and change "quite" to "quiet."
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Post by Swiftclaw on Jan 20, 2008 20:45:43 GMT -5
oh i forgot thanks a bunch  |
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Post by Frostfox on Jan 21, 2008 0:01:45 GMT -5
Yup. You're almost there, Swiftclaw!
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Post by {♥.::Frosteh::.♥} on Jan 21, 2008 8:58:05 GMT -5
VERY nice Swiftclaw! Definently accepted!
~Frostwhisper
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Post by Talltail on Jan 21, 2008 10:45:39 GMT -5
Congrulations Swiftclaw!
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Post by Frostfox on Jan 21, 2008 14:49:11 GMT -5
WOO YEAH SWIFTCLAW
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