Application Information and Form

[{♥.::Frosteh::.♥}]

[b]{Name}[/b]
[b]{Rank}[/b]
[b]{Clan}[/b]
[b]{Age}[/b]
[b]{Gender}[/b]
[b]{Personality}[/b]
[b]{Appearance}[/b]
[b]{History}[/b]
[b]{RP Example}[/b]
[b]{Picture}[/b]

Before you begin, you must know how to answer each 'question' above.

This is how I would write my answers:

{Name} Frostwhisper

{Rank} Leader (The only reason I'm leader is because I was the first cat in StarClan. Otherwise I'd need a "-star" name)

{Clan} StarClan (Obviously all four Clans EXCEPT StarClan, you must consult with me if you wish to join StarClan)

{Age} 102 Moons (Please put this in moons. There are 12 moons in a year, so think along those lines as well as the Warrior's lives)

{Gender} She-Cat (She-Cat is obviously female while Tom is male)

{Personality} I'm not going to write the full thing but I would like at least 7 sentances like this: "Frostwhisper is a strong-minded she-cat; her skills for interpreting signs from StarClan are very fine-tuned after many moons' experience." I will absolutely DESPISE you if you use sentances like this: "Frostwhisper is smart. She is good at her job." BLAH BLAH BLAH That would get you accepted in the land of NEVER! Stick to the nice, elaborate sentances.

{Appearance} Again, 7 sentances. Focus on not only coat color and size, but shape, any special things about your cat (appearance wise), etc. For example: "Frostwhisper has a silvery-gray tabby coat and light, icy blue eyes. Although she is blind, she sees with her large ears, ever-twitching whiskers, and light white paws." Again, avoid these sentances: "Frostwhisper is gray. She is blind. She has big ears."

{History} This is the big one. I require 10 good sentances. Same examples as last time, long and elaborate. I look for quality AND quantity. None of that short, choppy junk.

{RP Example} Here's your chance to SHINE. I only ask for 8 sentances, and a somewhat-elaborate plot. I want to know what's going on, who's envolved, etc. Develop the plot well enough so I'm intreagued, but not so much that I'm bored with tiny details. You can add some appearances, a bit of personality, but don't put in too much junk.

{Picture} This part is optional, if you can't find a picture, don't bother, but if you have a nice one at hand, go ahead and put it up.

Good names. NEVER have I seen people lacking name ideas. Here ya go:

Beginnings: moon- sun- bright- fire- blue- speckled- brown- mud- stone- lion- red- gray-

Endings: (warriors only) -claw -pelt -stripe -heart -scar -tail -eye

Full names: (Please don't use these. I'm using them as examples so you can get ideas. Maybe combine one ending with a different beginning) Moonshimmer Lightheart Ivysong Spottedarrow Dazzlewhisker Angelwing

Now, the only thing I ask of you is write so I can READ IT.

{Good Example}
"She sat down in the forest, awaiting Mercurypaw's return. Little did she know that Oceanclaw was prowling, waiting as well, to get a shot at the WindClan apprentice."

{Bad Example}
"she sadown in th forest, wait for Mercurypaw coming back. didn't know Oceanclaw bhind herto get him."

Also, please use proper punctuation, and don't use chatspeak (ch@t$p3@k) and no IM slang please. It just makes your stories harder to understand.

Also, please spell check to make sure everything is right, and reread your stories to make sure they make sense.