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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Dec 30, 2007 12:04:46 GMT -5
{Name}- Twilightstar
{Rank}- Leader
{Clan}- Windclan
{Age}- 29 moons
{Gender}- She-cat
{Personality}- Loyal kind-hearted but DON'T get her mad
{Appearance}- Beauticul dark brown tabby
{History}- Clan born
{RP Example}- Twilightstar awoke in her den and went outside to the freshkill pile and picked a rabbit. She loves the poen moor and the wet and the wet lands a true Windclan cat.
{Picture}-http://www.fanciers.com/breed-faqs/gifs/sokoke9.jpg
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Post by {♥.::Frosteh::.♥} on Dec 30, 2007 13:23:40 GMT -5
You need to have 7 sentances in Personality and Appearance, 10 in history, and 8 in RP Example. And please ELABORATE. It'll help your paragraphs.
Also, there is already a leader for WindClan. You could be deaputy though, if you'd like. You'd just need to edit your bio slightly and fix it like I said up there.
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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Dec 30, 2007 16:17:25 GMT -5
oh...ok
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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Dec 30, 2007 16:30:00 GMT -5
Whats elaborate mean?
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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Dec 30, 2007 16:34:56 GMT -5
nvm
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Post by {♥.::Frosteh::.♥} on Dec 30, 2007 21:36:24 GMT -5
It means descriptive
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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Dec 31, 2007 18:16:03 GMT -5
Ok thanks
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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Jan 1, 2008 13:29:22 GMT -5
WAIT!!!!!!!!!! Instead she's in Windclan!
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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Jan 1, 2008 13:37:07 GMT -5
Icewhisper heres what it REALLY is. ^^
{Name}- Twilightpool
{Rank}- Medicine Cat
{Clan}- Windclan
{Age}- 29 moons
{Gender}- She-cat
{Personality}- Kind-hearted, she can be really nice at times! But she can be a tad stubborn. She's very curious with Starclan and her ancestors. She has a strong connection with Starclan. She mixes herbs well and loves her duty to her clan. But at times she wonders what life would be like as a warrior. But that thought goes away when she working.
{Appearance}- A tabby with white spots. That makes her very attractive. But she's a meddie cat so no mate. She has a big ears. So she can hear quite far away. She can run fast like all Windclan cats. Her legs are strong so she can run really fast. She
has a long tail.
{History}- Twilightpool wasn't always a medicine cat apprentice when she was an apprentice. Before she had been a warrior apprentice. But had been a fight with a cat from another clan with a Windclan warrior. The Windclan warrior had been badly injured and Twilightpaw wanted to help. But she wasn't a medicine cat so she couldn't. It was then and there when she decided if she REALLY wanted to help the clan that she must became a medicine cat. She's never had any regrets.
{RP Example}- Twilightpaw was in the Windclan camp, grooming herself when a Windclan cat came in bleeding. The medicine cat ran out of their den as soon as they heard the warrior come into the camp. Commotion had come to the camp all the apprentices ran out to see what happened. The queens hurried the kits inside the nursery. Twilightpaw ran to the medicine cats side and asked to help. Before they could answer a warrior hissed at her that she should go away. From that moment on she was determined to become a medicine cat. She wanted to help the wounded.
{Picture}-Still looking
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Post by {♥.::Frosteh::.♥} on Jan 1, 2008 14:09:16 GMT -5
*giggles* Alright, very nice. ACCEPTED! (Congrats!)
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Post by ~Twilightpool~ on Jan 1, 2008 14:10:47 GMT -5
Thanks! *giggles back*
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Post by Scarshadow on Jan 2, 2008 19:10:41 GMT -5
Awesome!
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